Post by Blair Buchannan-Valentyne on May 5, 2015 19:33:27 GMT -6
what i pay attention to most in roleplays are the little details because they can sometimes make the reader feel more included. for example, you keeping the theme of Tristan having that headache throughout the entire rp i thought was a nice touch.
I also thought it was clever how you showed Tristan going along with the whole "keeping the boss in his corner" thing even though he clearly doesnt care for Jesse. Your writing is solid and the Tristan character has been doing well because of it. I'm impressed that you've been able to come back so strong without any signs of ring rust (knock on wood), especially because I personally know how much you struggled with writers block over the last two weeks. It doesn't show at all. Good job!